Incorporate more theory into some of research; more examples needed on both ancillaries, inlcuding at least one more print based billboard; features pages needs more examples
Most of above advice followed and research and planning is now complete-high level 3. Still room for improvement in terms of theory; a few need proofreading for greater accuracy. Currently 14/20 LAF
Research excellent in places-esp. front cover codes and conventions. To ensure consistency, the rest would need to be to this standard, whereas currently most of the rest of research is more like mid-top level 3. Audience/focus group top level 3. Planning: just missing shot list and drafts for billboard and website. Currently around 15/20. If any more tweaks made to current research and last few planning elemnts added, this can rise to 16 or maybe 17. LAF 09/11/15
Incorporate more theory into some of research; more examples needed on both ancillaries, inlcuding at least one more print based billboard; features pages needs more examples
ReplyDeleteMost of above advice followed and research and planning is now complete-high level 3. Still room for improvement in terms of theory; a few need proofreading for greater accuracy. Currently 14/20 LAF
ReplyDeleteResearch excellent in places-esp. front cover codes and conventions. To ensure consistency, the rest would need to be to this standard, whereas currently most of the rest of research is more like mid-top level 3. Audience/focus group top level 3. Planning: just missing shot list and drafts for billboard and website. Currently around 15/20. If any more tweaks made to current research and last few planning elemnts added, this can rise to 16 or maybe 17. LAF 09/11/15
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